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 Extended Metaphor poem
« Thread Started on Dec 2, 2003, 9:52pm »
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My Parents
My parents are like the military.
They stalk the house
with curious and strict eyes
Then sleeps throughout the night.
But when they wake up...
Their medals are clanking straight against their chest
& roars at me for attention
they bark orders as my mom rages
through the house with my dad:
" Throw away the garbage! "
" Clean your room! "
Then goes back to the kitchen
I am like a soldier who carries out what they say.
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« Reply #1 on Feb 13, 2005, 2:13pm »
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I'm sorry to say this but before you write something on the internet make sure it is correct. your poem is not an extended metaphor, not even a metaphor, in fact it is a simile because you are using the words "like" to compare a thing to another one.
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clint
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« Reply #2 on Jun 2, 2005, 11:02pm »
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are u a retard an extended metaphor begins with a simile do some goddam research before u critize peoples hard work.
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« Reply #3 on Dec 21, 2005, 12:23am »
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It is to extended metaphor she's comparing her parents to the military. duh!!!!
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rocksyourworld
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« Reply #4 on Feb 23, 2006, 10:15pm »
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this is so cool when you guys get pissed off at one another on the internet ;D
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miguel
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« Reply #5 on Feb 25, 2006, 1:20am »
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>:(
I think that guys right metaphor poems dont start with a similie!
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